10 Minute Play Project: Day 2 (Drafting); Tips for 10-minute Plays; Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf

LAB:

Take the first few minutes of class to continue reading/critiquing your peers plays. By 7:45 stop and focus on the following writing tasks:

#5: Premise, premise, premise: In one sentence what do you want to write a short play about? Finish this thought: I want to write a play about...

Finally, using the outline from homework and brainstorming prompts you completed last class, make a list of everything you know about this new play you’re beginning. Could be characters’ names, location, time of day, geographical spot in the world or galaxy, a need, a piece of clothing, a desire, a repeated physical gesture, anything that could be in this new world of your play, no matter how far-fetched or banal, put it on the list. Create a working title, a short cast list, and a short description of your setting and time. In other words, create the title page, cast list, and set description for your play today. Plan out your plan and begin writing it.

Follow these restrictions/rules:

• Your 10-minute play should be between 6-10 pages, written in proper play script format.
• You must use 3-4 characters and develop all of them.
• Your play script should include a title page and cast/set list (these are not to be counted in the page # requirement). 
• Use your outline to guide you if you get stuck when writing. 
• Spend your time in the lab today working on your 10-minute play draft. It is NOT due today.

CLASSROOM: After our quiz on Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf, we will begin screening the film (1966) starring Richard Burton, Elizabeth Taylor, Sandy Dennis, and George Segal. All four actors received Academy Award Nominations for their excellent acting. Both Taylor and Dennis actually won them.

The film director Mike Nichols is one of the American New Wave directors. Haskel Wexler was the cinematographer.

Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf (1966) was one of the films that challenged the restricted film code by the MPAA (Motion Picture Association of America). Originally, no one under 18 could legally buy a ticket to see the film unless they were accompanied by an adult. The film was also banned and shocked audiences with its content and lewd language. Tame perhaps by today's standards, the film is one of the reasons why films today can be edgy. It was shot entirely in black & white--one of the most expensive black and white films to be made at the time.

Film is not stage. As you watch the play, notice subtle differences between the play and movie.

HOMEWORK: None. If you did not complete your reading of Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf by Edward Albee, please do so. You'll learn a lot about writing really good verbal fight scenes. 

Workshop; Generating Ideas Prompts; Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf

LAB:

Take the first few minutes of class to continue reading/critiquing your peers plays. By 7:45 stop and focus on the following writing tasks:

5 prompts to jumpstart your writing by Winter Miller (and Brad Craddock)
Use the prompts below to prepare your 10-minute play script for our next writing project. Your project should follow these rules:

• 3-4 characters. That's all. As we read the next few plays, notice how the playwrights use 4 characters to create a pretty complex and character driven play.
• Write your play in the standard play script format for writers.
• Your play script should be between 6-10 pages in length.
• Use the prompts below to get an idea. Please generate ideas first--instead of just sitting down and typing. In fact, instead of typing these prompts, use a journal/notebook and a pen/pencil. Write by hand. If you skip this step you will get stuck and then...well, I told you so. Yes, you may get stuck anyway. Generate ideas first. Then worry about shaping them into a well written play script.

Let's mix the ingredients first. Then I'll show you how to bake them...

Prompt #1: Write a letter to yourself from someone in your past (or present) who has said kind words to you. A favorite teacher, a family member, a best friend, and just have them say some things they love about you, some words of encouragement. Spend only 3 minutes or so on it. First name that comes to you, just go. Surprise yourself. 1-2-3: go!

#2 (10 minutes total): Give yourself TWO MINUTES (time yourself) for each of the next tasks. You must keep your pen moving, do not stop to think. If you run out of ideas, just repeat the last word you’ve said until a new word enters your mind. So if all you can think of is peanuts, keep writing peanuts until the next word comes out of you. Make these lists:

• Make a list of at least five things you’ve never seen on a stage before that would totally floor you if you did. (For instance, very elderly people skiing; a baby wrestling a snake, an elephant on a skateboard, etc.)
• Come up with as many lies as you’ve ever told a friend, parent, sibling, or teacher (you can lie about your lies if you want, I’m not looking over your shoulder) (For instance here are some lies: I have horns; I will always love waffles; I didn’t see you there; I love you).
• Make a list of machines to replace people in the future and what they will do. (For instance a robot that cleans your oven and tells you a bedtime story, a cell phone that absolves you of your sins, a headset that fills you in on all the gossip you missed that day, etc.) 
• Make a list of at least five things you never want to see on a stage! (For instance: a beautiful sheep who tramples teenagers for sport; an actor removing her liver with a knife, a train wreck, a falling chandelier, a helicopter landing on stage--the last two have been done before!)
• Remember to keep your pen moving, repeat if necessary, or make up a new word, just keep writing until your two minutes is up.

Reread your above lists and circle any words or phrases that excite you. You don’t have to know why. Next, choose 3 of the many things you’ve circled and write them down. You have your last 2 minutes to complete that.

#3A.Stretch break. Take one minute and goof off. Stretch. Relax. Stretch. Relax. Now get back to writing you next prompt:

#3B: Spend 15-20 minutes on this next part. Really push yourself to keep going, even when you want to quit. See if you can remain open and focused on this task.

• Take your three things from your list above. (For me that might be, very elderly people skiing, I have horns, and a person in performance removing her own liver).
• Take the first character who jumps into your head, give that person a name (ie JUANA).
• Now, write a scene in which JUANA witnesses another character (ie FRANKIE) doing any of the above things you circled WITHOUT being seen. Then have JUANA make her presence known to FRANKIE. What happens?
• Somewhere in the scene, one of the other things on your list comes to pass during the scene—what happens? How do they both react to this event or revelation? Are they surprised? Did they know it? Are they angry? Do they respond by force? With love?
• Take this scene as far as it goes and if need be, bring in more characters to engage with the two you have. Let them have real connections to each other, real conflict and real emotions and see where they take you.
• It’s okay if surprising things come out of their mouth—maybe they’re sexist or racist or have a Martha’s Vineyard accent or curse a ton—whatever idiosyncrasies these characters present to you, let them have it. Trust your impulses.
• Do not go looking outward on google for confirmation that such a person could exist, could make those choices. Just go with your gut and see where it leads.

#4: Make a list of things that absolutely terrify you. (For instance, Nazis; an angry bear). Write continuously for one minute. Now, take one of your characters from the scene you just wrote a few minutes ago (JUANA or FRANKIE), preferably the one that is least like you. Write down this character’s name. Take that character and have a character most similar or like you approach this first character.

• Begin to insult the first character for his/her beliefs, or appearance, or actions.
• How does your first character respond to the second character’s insults? Do they fight? Is it verbal? Physical? What happens?
• Let your impulses dictate whatever the conflict is, but do not shy away from it. See if you can get as down and dirty with these two people. See if you can go somewhere that feels IRREVOCABLE with them. Then, at some point in the scene, one character will turn to the other and reveal an important secret. Then what happens? (10 minutes)

Take a pee break/water break. Do NOT check your phone or your email Stay in this burgeoning world you’re creating. Go to the library and return with Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf by recently deceased superauthor Edward Albee.

With the rest of our time in the lab today or when we move to the classroom, please complete:

Finally: #5: Before you pack up your stuff for the night, make a list of everything you know about this new play you’re beginning. Could be characters’ names, location, time of day, geographical spot in the world or galaxy, a need, a piece of clothing, a desire, a repeated physical gesture, anything that could be in this new world of your play, no matter how far-fetched or banal, put it on the list. Create a working title, a short cast list, and a short description of your setting and time.

Between this class and next, please outline your play. You only have 6-10 pages to tell your story. You must use 3-4 characters and develop all of them. Outline the following (page # suggestions are based on a 10 page play script; adjust for a play that is a little shorter or longer as you see fit):

• What is your inciting incident? (page 1)
• What is your major dramatic question? (pages 1-10)
• What is your crisis or complication? (pages 3-4)
• What is your play's event? (pages 3-7)
• What is your character's major decision? (pages 2-8)
• What is each character's dark moment? (pages 1-10)
• What is each character's enlightenment? (pages 5-7)
• What is your climax? (page 8-10)
• What is your denouement or resolution? (page 10)
• What startling and interesting image will you end your play with?

Bring your outline with you next class to begin working on your play. Or see homework below.


DISCUSSION: Compare & contrast How I Learned to Drive with Driving Miss Daisy.

READING: Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf. Pair, Stand, Perform. We will read as much of the script as possible in class.

HOMEWORK: Complete your reading of Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf. As you read, take particular note of the interactions between the 4 characters. How do each become the protagonist and antagonist as the play unwinds. Look for the horrible secret! You'll never guess...

And complete your outline using the brainstorming exercises you did today in class. Bring your outline and your play scripts back with you next class. Maybe there will be a test.

Driving Miss Daisy; Play Scene Workshop

Today's class will be held in the library.

In your small groups, please complete your reading of Driving Miss Daisy.

With time remaining, please workshop your play scenes using the handouts as guidelines for discussion.

HOMEWORK: Please complete Paula Vogel's play How I Learned to Drive for Thursday's class. Be prepared to discuss the play along with Driving Miss Daisy.

Character/Scene Exercises; Driving Miss Daisy & How I Learned to Drive

LAB:

Exercise: Complete the following character exercise this morning in the lab.

Looking at pictures and watching people can be a goldmine for character building. As a playwright, one of the most important tasks you will have to accomplish is creating interesting characters. Boring characters make for boring plays, so it's helpful to have a few ideas about character design before jumping into the pool of monologues, scenes, and plays.

Task #1: Brainstorming Characters:

IN YOUR JOURNAL or NOTEBOOK please complete the following exercise. DO NOT TURN THIS IN. Instead, you may use it for a writing assignment.

Please take a look at the photos of people below. For each photo, give the person a name, age or age range, and 1-sentence physical description. Follow this up with a 1-sentence goal or major decision.
For example:

GEORGETTE MINSKY, female, age 25-30. Georgette always wears a baseball glove (even to church) and too much lipstick. She wants to witness a miracle first hand or at least win her minor-league softball team's championship trophy in memory of her dead grandma.

Create a character for any 3 of these pictures (you may do all of them, if you'd like):

Now find some pictures on your own (or use your own photographs) and continue your list.

Task #2: Please turn in your homework from last class: (see post below for details). Interview with Paula Vogel at the Playwright Center in Minneapolis. (Please view at least 15 minutes of the interview. You may watch more, as your time allows. Please make sure you let me know which section you watched or how long you watched by indicating the time code on your homework draft. 

Summarize the section you watch by summarizing the key or important points she makes (or important points for you to hear as a beginning playwright). Complete your summary paragraph with your own reaction to what Paula Vogel's key points were in the section(s) you watched. Turn in for participation credit today.

Task #3: If you have not yet turned in a draft of your play script, please do so. It is now late.

Task #4: Please begin reading your homework: How I Learned to Drive by Paula Vogel.

CLASSROOM:

#1: Please get the play Driving Miss Daisy from the library.
#2: When we return to the classroom we will complete a scene exercise. We will use the exercises we wrote today later in the course.
#3: In small groups of 4, begin reading the play Driving Miss Daisy in class. Please bring your play scripts back with you next class to complete the play reading in your group.

HOMEWORK: Please read Paula Vogel's Pulitzer Prize Winning play: How I Learned to Drive (aim to complete the play by Tuesday of next week!)

The Baltimore Waltz; Paula Vogel Interview

This morning we will spend the class reading The Baltimore Waltz together. If there is time at the end of class, we will begin watching the interview with Paula Vogel at the Playwright Center in Minneapolis. If we do not finish reading Baltimore Waltz in class, please complete the play for homework as well.

HOMEWORK: Please view at least 15 minutes of the interview. You may watch more, as your time allows. Please make sure you let me know which section you watched or how long you watched by indicating the time code on your homework draft. 

Summarize the section you watch by summarizing the key or important points she makes (or important points for you to hear as a beginning playwright). Complete your summary paragraph with your own reaction to what Paula Vogel's key points were in the section(s) you watched.

2 Person Scene Due; The Baltimore Waltz

Lab: 1st period. Please complete a draft of your monologue 2-person scenes. Print or share your Google Doc with me by end of day today. If you finish your scene work before the bell, make sure you have read The Baltimore Waltz background material--you'll appreciate the play more, if you do.

Things to do before you're done:

1. Correct grammar, formatting, etc.
2. Give your play a title
3. Read over your script--preferably out loud to catch difficult lines, awkward sentences, vague or uninteresting parts, etc. Cut and revise these sections.
4. Feel free to borrow a style from Mamet or other playwrights in regards to dialogue.
5. Remove unnecessary or distracting stage directions.
6. Look over your work one more time before submitting/printing.

When you have completed your work, please watch "Dutchman" from the posted link or the one below. Also, check out these videos:

• Oleanna with Bill Pullman & Julia Stiles. 
• Oleanna at the Old Vic (ending scene)
• Oleanna (full movie, 1994; with William H. Macy)
• 'Night Mother (trailer, movie with Sissy Spacek & Anne Bancroft)
• How I Learned to Drive, Interview with Paula Vogel: Women in Theatre

Classroom: 2nd period. Let's discuss Dutchman and any lingering remarks about Oleanna. Then, let's begin reading The Baltimore Waltz in class.

HOMEWORK: Complete The Baltimore Waltz on your own. Summarize the scenes we do not read in class. Your summary should be direct and concise. Answer: what happens in each scene? Hand this in as participation credit next class.

Vocabulary to know: Suggested Setting or Suggested Set: A setting on stage in which only a few set pieces or lighting or other technical elements take the place of elaborate set construction. Suggested sets are usually not very realistic, but use metaphor to suggest a theme or meaning for the action of the play.

Oleanna: Day 2; Dutchman

LAB: (1st period)

Please spend your time in the lab writing your 2-person scenes inspired by your monologue draft. If you finish early, please feel free to view "Dutchman" by Amiri Baraka (55 min). Please turn in your answers to the previous homework for this play by end of the lab period.

You will likely need more room than what is provided to adequately answer the questions. Write your answers SEPARATELY from the question handout sheet. Answers will count as a quiz grade for this play.

Amiri Baraka was also a poet! Read a few of Amiri Baraka's poems here. Maybe one will inspire a scene.

CLASSROOM: (2nd period)

We will complete our reading of Oleanna, and discuss the play (and Dutchman).

WRITING EXERCISE: Scene starter exercise.

HOMEWORK: Please read the background materials for the play: The Baltimore Waltz by Paula Vogel. We will be reading this play next class. Continue writing your 2 person scenes. Plan to finish a draft by next class.