Thursday, April 10, 2014

Film Noir & Citizen Kane (Orson Welles)

Please turn in your pitch assignments today.

The Elements of Film Noir (documentary)

Here are a few things to watch for in the film noir genre:

1. A protagonist that is cynical or detached
2. A femme fatale who leads the protagonist astray
3. A mystery, crime, or use of suspense
4. A naive scapegoat to take the rap of some "crime"
5. Goons (hired criminals who give the protagonist a hard time)
6. Razor sharp dialogue
7. Reference and description of low key lighting

Film noir films of the 1940's:
The Third Man 
The Big Sleep
Double Indemnity (full film)
Casablanca

Now a little technique and advice about making films:
CITIZEN KANE & ORSON WELLES

Citizen Kane is considered the world's #1 film. It is typically included in film studies curriculum. Because we are far behind schedule in our course, we will be skimming over the film, examining a few scenes.

Today, please watch these scenes from Citizen Kane (1941):
Orson Welles as Auteur:
Welles directed, wrote (partial), and starred in this film (even though it was thought he wasn't old enough to portray Kane). While Welles had direct control over the film and its look, there were other people who contributed artistically. Some of the invention and creativity of film making includes:
The Deep Focus shot!
Low angle shots revealing ceilings!
Moving shots used as wipes!
Overlapping dialogue! (not original to Welles, but a trend in Screwball Comedies)
Long uninterrupted shots!
Expressionist lighting and photography!
Multiple perspective! (adds complexity to a plot...)
Orson Welles, Other Films from the 1940's & 1950's:

Tuesday, April 8, 2014

The Treatment

What is a Film Treatment?
A pitch is used to convince a film company to produce your film. The pitch is usually a one page summary of the main action, characters, and setting of the film. Essentially it deals with the idea or premise of the film.

The film treatment is usually a 2-5 page document that tells the whole story focusing on the highlights. Actually, the professional ones are more like 5-30 pages, but we'll shorten that for you.

A film treatment is more detailed than a pitch. It can include a scene by scene breakdown of a script. It is used BEFORE writing the real script so the author can plan his/her project. Yes, you read that right: plan.

How To Write a Treatment
The treatment should read like a short story and be written in the present tense. It should present the entire story including the ending, and use some key scenes and dialogue from the screenplay it is based on. For a sample of what this looks like, check out the handout "Terminator" by James Cameron.

What Should Be in the Treatment?

1. A Working title
2. The writer's name
3. Introduction to key characters
4. Who, what, when, why and where. Describe each setting. Describe each MAJOR or important character. Describe the "what" of each scene: what's going on, etc. and think about the WHY: why does the character do this, live here, work there, want this or that?, etc.
5. Act 1 in one to three paragraphs. Set the scene, dramatize the main conflicts. Break your treatment into BEGINNING, MIDDLE, END. Your beginning will deal with exposition, the inciting incident, and maybe a couple of conflicts presented in the rising action. It is typical to end the first act with a turning point for the protagonist.
6. Act 2 in two to six paragraphs. Should dramatize how the conflicts introduced in Act 1 lead to a crisis or dark moment.
7. Act 3 in one to three paragraphs. Dramatize the final conflict and resolution. The third act typically includes the climax of the story and its denouement or resolution. For help in plotting, read the next section carefully.
The Three Act Structure
Basic screenplay structure for a full length film usually has three acts.

In The Poetics, Aristotle suggested that all stories should have a beginning, middle, and an end. Well, duh. You know that. But really. You need to remember this advice.

Breaking the plot of a story into three parts, gives us a 3-part or act structure. The word "act" means "the action of carrying something out. For our purposes think act one (beginning), act two (middle), and act three (end) of your short film.

Act 1, called the Set-up, The situation and characters and conflict are introduced. This classically is 30 minutes long. For a short film it can be only a few minutes or 1 minute.

Act 2, called The Conflict, often an hour long, is where the conflict begins and expands until it reaches a crisis.

Act 3, called The Resolution, the conflict rises to one more crisis (the last one called the climax) and then is resolved.

How To Write The Treatment
Find A Title
The first contact a prospective producer has with a script is the title. Pick a title that gives a clear idea of what genre the screenplay is written in. Blood House is probably not a romantic comedy. Americans like one or two word titles: Psycho, Saw, The Hobbit, Rocky, Pan's Labyrinth, Star Wars, Animal House, Tangled, Avatar, Pinocchio, etc.
After a title, start a logline: a brief one sentence summary of the movie. For example: And Then Came Love is a character-driven romantic comedy about a high-powered Manhattan single mom who opens Pandora's box when she seeks out the anonymous sperm donor father of her young son.

Your treatment should include a synopsis.
Treatment sample #1
Treatment sample #2

HOMEWORK: Your treatment is due Thursday at the BEGINNING of class. We'll be watching The Maltese Falcon Thursday. To prepare for this, please read the article on Film Noir for Thursday. You should know the stylistic characteristics of this genre of film.

Thursday, April 3, 2014

Technicolor; Walt Disney; Treatments

Congratulations to Grace & Gena for winning 2nd place in the Sokol competition. We are proud of you! Geva is contacting people about scripts, so if you submitted and won something, please let me know!

Thank you all who attended the Coffeehouse last night. You represented your class very well! Yay!

Please turn in your Disney response (see posts below--look under homework!) and turn in the narratology essay you were supposed to have turned in last class. If you don't have it, add it to your homework stack and complete it this weekend. Chop-chop. Please do yourself the favor of participating in our class consistently. Not completing homework (even if you are absent--and especially if you are absent) will leave you with a bottle-neck of work at the end of a marking period. Work steadily!

Color in Film

Color tends to be a subconscious element in film. It has an emotional appeal which often suggests mood of the film or characters in it. At its most effective, complimentary characters are dressed in complimentary colors--antagonists are dressed in contrasting colors to their protagonists. Characters can match or contrast their settings and a whole host of other useful symbols can be created with color.

The first Technicolor film was THE GULF BETWEEN (U.S., 1917), a five-reeler made by Technicolor Motion Picture Corp. in Florida mainly for trade showings in eastern cities, to create interest in color movies among producers and exhibitors. It did not receive nationwide distribution. A lost film today, only a few frames survive.

The first two strip Technicolor feature made in Hollywood, and the first to receive nationwide distribution, was the costume drama THE TOLL OF THE SEA (1922).

Another silent movie filmed entirely in two strip Technicolor was the swashbuckler THE BLACK PIRATE (U.S., 1926), produced by and starring Douglas Fairbanks.

THE TEN COMMANDMENTS (Cecil B. DeMille's epic, 1923) THE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA (1925) BEN-HUR (1925) and KING OF KINGS (Cecil B. DeMille, 1926) used color as a gimmick or in parts.

The first all-talking Technicolor feature was the Warner Bros. musical ON WITH THE SHOW (1929).

All of the color films up to this point were two-color processes, which could capture only two of the three primary colors of light.

In 1932, Technicolor perfected a three-color motion picture process (also known as three-strip Technicolor, because three negatives were employed in the camera, one for each primary color of light -- red, green, and blue).

It was introduced with the Walt Disney cartoon FLOWERS AND TREES (1932), which won the first Academy Award for Animation. Walt Disney kept a monopoly on 3-color technicolor from 1932-1935.

The first feature-length movie in three-strip Technicolor was the costume comedy-drama BECKY SHARP (U.S., 1935)

Technicolor used a three color system: red, blue, green (these colors therefore are most vivid)

Early color was used as an expression (expressionism) of the director’s or cinematographer’s story, and so early films with color tend to be ones that are formalistic, artificial, or exotic. Color was often not used for “realistic” movies.

Warm colors: red, yellow, orange (brown)
Cool colors: Blue, green, violet (white)

Technicolor fragments.
Phantom of the Opera Masquerade Scene
During the 1930's, technicolor was still expensive. It was still being used as a movie gimmick as seen here. The Women (1939); here's the trailer

It was therefore technicolor and the 3 strip technicolor process that rocketed the Walt Disney Studios into a formidable film studio. Please refer to the chapter on Walt Disney (see previous handout that you probably discarded) and take notes on him, his studio, and why he's important in the film industry.
HOMEWORK/Classwork: Begin writing your script idea. Create a TREATMENT of your film idea. This treatment is due completed by Thursday, April 10. You will have only one full day in the lab to complete this, so please begin your treatment AS HOMEWORK this weekend.

What is a Film Treatment?
A pitch is used to convince a film company to produce your film. The pitch is usually a one page summary of the main action, characters, and setting of the film. Essentially it deals with the idea.

The film treatment is usually a 2-5 page document that tells the whole story focusing on the highlights. It is more detailed than a pitch. It can include a scene by scene breakdown of a script. It is used BEFORE writing the real script so the author can plan his/her project.

How To Write a Treatment
The treatment should read like a short story and be written in the present tense. It should present the entire story including the ending, and use some key scenes and dialogue from the screenplay it is based on.

What Should Be in the Treatment?

1. A Working title
2. The writer's name
3. Introduction to key characters
4. Who, what, when, why and where.
5. Act 1 in one to three paragraphs. Set the scene, dramatize the main conflicts.
6. Act 2 in two to six paragraphs. Should dramatize how the conflicts introduced in Act 1 lead to a crisis.
7. Act 3 in one to three paragraphs. Dramatize the final conflict and resolution.
The Three Act Structure
Basic screenplay structure for a full length film usually has three acts.

In The Poetics, Aristotle suggested that all stories should have a beginning, middle, and an end. Well, duh. You know that. But really. You need to remember this advice.

Breaking the plot of a story into three parts, gives us a 3-part or act structure. The word "act" means "the action of carrying something out. For our purposes think act one (beginning), act two (middle), and act three (end) of your short film.

Act 1, called the Set-up, The situation and characters and conflict are introduced. This classically is 30 minutes long. For a short film it can be only a few minutes or 1 minute.

Act 2, called The Conflict, often an hour long, is where the conflict begins and expands until it reaches a crisis.

Act 3, called The Resolution, the conflict rises to one more crisis (the last one called the climax) and then is resolved.

How To Write The Treatment
Find A Title
The first contact a prospective producer has with a script is the title. Pick a title that gives a clear idea of what genre the screenplay is written in. Blood House is probably not a romantic comedy. Americans like one or two word titles: Psycho, Saw, The Hobbit, Rocky, Pan's Labyrinth, Star Wars, Animal House, Tangled, Avatar, Pinocchio, etc.
After a title, start a logline: a brief one sentence summary of the movie. For example: And Then Came Love is a character-driven romantic comedy about a high-powered Manhattan single mom who opens Pandora's box when she seeks out the anonymous sperm donor father of her young son.

Your treatment should include a synopsis.
Treatment sample #1
Treatment sample #2

Coffeehouse 2014



John and Jake and the Tube of Toothpaste: Khamphasong Inthavong

Czar Wars: Nikki Ehmann & Gena Driscoll 

Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Writing a Film Paper

In the beginning of this course we talked about different film writing experiences: the film fan, the film reviewer, the film historian, and the film critic. There is, of course, the final one which is the film writer, but we'll hold off on that one for today.

Students interested in majoring in film production or film studies in college are often asked to read scripts and watch films, after which the student is asked to analyze and evaluate the experience. Such practice is a good way to prepare yourself for a more academic film career.

Today, try your own hand at writing a film analysis. Your essay should fall between 500-1,000 words, with the lower numbers being a minimum requirement probably for students weak in their writing skills or who have not actually read. Aim for about 750 words (2-3 pages, double spaced).

Follow the prompt given to you by the sub. Work on your film script paper focusing on the topic of narratology. Before you begin in earnest, plan your essay in a notebook/journal by collecting some examples of key scenes or examples you found in the script (I asked you to take notes--see post details below). Use your notes to help you write and structure your essay.

Your paper is due by the end of class. Good luck!

If you finish early, please watch any film clips you missed (see posts below), and/or work on your homework for Friday.

HOMEWORK: Complete the reading of the Disney chapter handout and write your personal reflection, ready to hand in Friday, April 4.


Sunday, March 30, 2014

Screenwriting Brainstorming; Preparing for Narratology Film Script Review

Today, during period 1, please complete the following:

1. Complete your reading of your chosen script:
As you read, please examine the genre, the plot structure, the character portrayal, the setting, POV, and intended audience. What elements of the film script are formalistic, which are classical or realistic, etc. How does the film script adhere to the rules of the genre (what are those rules?) and find examples of the narrative style. Take notes and be prepared to write an essay on this next class.

2. Work on your original film script brainstorming exercises. See below for some advice in coming up with ideas. Use the graphic organizers to write and plan your original film script. You are NOT writing your idea yet. Everyone should work alone on an idea. The chance to collaborate will come soon.

Use the handouts and organizers presented today if you need them to help you. During 2nd period, we will screen some films from the 1930's.

Screenwriting Tips
1. Most of writing a screenplay (about 65%) is done in planning and prewriting.
2. Writing a screenplay is a succession of breakdowns: moving from the general to the specific.
3. Don't write a script for a movie you yourself wouldn't go see.
4. Remember the goal of every writer is to get an "emotional" response from your audience. Scripts that are too bland or boring or cliche, only anger an audience (and don't usually get made in the first place).
Writers think in different ways:
1. Inductively: from specific to the universal
2. Deductively: from the universal to the specific
3. Logically: How one thing causes another thing to happen
4. Non-logically: Absurdity or mere coincidence
5. Creatively: discovering hidden connections or relationships between two unrelated things (i.e. metaphorically)
It's okay to think in any of these ways. No one way is the right way. You, of course, can also combine these ways of thinking too. Be creative!

HOMEWORK: Complete your reading/analysis of your chosen film script. Take notes and be ready to write a review/essay on narratology next class on your chosen script. This would be an in-class test.

Please read the article on Walt Disney & Snow White for Friday. Write a written response to the article and include information about the first Disney film you remember seeing, or if you have been impacted by Disney films/studios, etc. talk a little about your observations/memories. This paper will be handed in as participation credit FRIDAY.

Thursday, March 27, 2014

Laurel & Hardy; Hal Roach; & the Golden Age

Hal Roach was born in Elmira, NY (near us!), before moving to Hollywood. He worked for the Pathe Exchange Co. before working for MGM (Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer) as a producer. He is best known for producing the comedy teams of Laurel & Hardy and The Our Gang (or Little Rascals).

Laurel and Hardy
Not all silent film stars made the transition to talkies. One comic duo that did, however, was Stan Laurel and Oliver Hardy. This iconic duo made over 100 films together, initially short films, before expanding into feature length films by the end of the 1930s. More can be examined by clicking on the link of their name above. Here are a few clips/films:
The Little Rascals (various clips/films):
Whatever Happened to the Little Rascals (information, although a bit grim)

The 1930's: The Golden Age of Film

The 1930's is considered the Golden Age of Film. Please review and take notes on these following film clips. You should note who is starring in which roles and how certain actors and directors helped shape the genres we now recognize in film today. You will be tested on the material found here, so please watch attentively and make some observations about film in the 1930's.

As for camera work, there are few tricks being used with cameras. Angles are mostly eye-level, with medium, long, and close up shots being used with transitions such as the wipe, the iris, fade to black to indicate scene changes. There is still rear projection, tracking shots, dolly shots, and elaborate sets (particularly for war and epic films), but overall, the feel of 1930's film is like watching a play. With the invention of sound, movies rely on written dialogue to move the plot and develop character (as opposed to using solely a visual medium). Famous directors and writers such as Frank Capra, Walt Disney and writer George S. Kaufman to name only a few make their appearance in this era. Since sound is a new invention, the use of music is an important element. See what other details you can observe as you watch the clips:

Hell's Angels (1930) Premiere clip (not the film, but the hubbub about the film)
Hell's Angels (1930) clip with Jean Harlow
Anna Christie (1930) With Greta Garbo
Tarzan, The Ape Man (1932) Johnny Weissmuller
Morocco (1930) with Marlene Dietrich

Grand Hotel (1932) with Joan Crawford & John Barrymore
King Kong (1933) starring a large gorilla, Robert Armstrong and Fay Wray
King Kong (2nd clip)
Mutiny on the Bounty (1935) Clark Gable & Charles Laughton
Captain Blood (1935) with Errol Flynn & Basil Rathbone (documentary clip)

The Murky Middle (Even More Advice)

Aristotle wrote that stories should have a beginning, middle, and end. Middles can be difficult. You might have a smashing opening to a stor...