Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Film Script Draft

Today, please use the time in the lab to work on your film drafts. While many of your peers are taking an exam this morning, please use the time in the lab to write. You will find that having the extra day will be helpful as you prepare and craft your draft. This assignment will be due soon, so please work on it.

If you have not yet done so, please watch the recent videos in the posts below. Please get caught up, as the rest of this course involves a lot of material.

HOMEWORK: Try to finish your draft (a good marking point for progress is about page 7-8 by the end of today).

Monday, May 14, 2012

More Writing Tips: Composing Your Short Film

Please use the time in lab today to write your short script (based on your chosen pitch). Advice about writing follows. If you need a break, spend some time to watch these videos, but get right back to writing after viewing.

The best stories involve this structure:
  • A who that must do (Action or Cause) something so that (some Effect) something won't happen.
or in other words:
  • A character (usually) who must do X in order that N won't happen.
Dialogue
Writing Dialogue - 4 minute film (Video)
Writing Screenplays that Sell (Video)

Writing Better Screenplays
Entering a Scene
How to Write a Script

Script Format
Script Format video (part one)
Script Format video (part two)
How to Format a Movie Script

HOMEWORK: If you haven't written a substantial number of pages today, please catch up by completing some of your work as homework. Otherwise none.

Sunday, May 13, 2012

Screenwriting Tips

1. Most of writing a screenplay (about 65%) is done in planning and prewriting.
2. Writing a screenplay is a succession of breakdowns: moving from the general to the specific.
3. Don't write a script for a movie you yourself wouldn't go see.
4. Remember the goal of every writer is to get an "emotional" response from your audience. Scripts that are too bland or boring or cliche, only anger an audience (and don't usually get made in the first place).

Writers think in different ways:
1. Inductively: from specific to the universal
2. Deductively: from the universal to the specific
3. Logically: How one thing causes another thing to happen
4. Non-logically: Absurdity or mere coincidence
5. Creatively: discovering hidden connections or relationships between two unrelated things (i.e. metaphorically)
It's okay to think in any of these ways. No one way is the right way. You, of course, can also combine these ways of thinking too.

Get ideas from:
1. Experience (personal or from those around you)
2. What you overhear (conversation)
3. News/Advertising
4. Photographs, paintings, visual art
5. Mind-mapping on a specific subject
6. Speculative brainstorming: asking: What if...?
7. Dreams and/or visualization
8. Free association
9. Adaptation (novels, short stories, poems, memoirs, etc.)
10. Intertexuality (stealing similar ideas from other sources)
After coming up with an idea, test its strength by asking:
1. Who, what, where, when, how, why?
2. Does it have "legs" - is it dramatic and interesting?
3. What's at stake for your character/protagonist?
4. Is the situation understandable or filmable?
5. Is the story too personal or vague?

Always play the devil's advocate when considering the validity of your writing/story/characters/plot, etc. What weaknesses are in your script? Try to fix them after writing a first draft or during the first draft, if you can.

Thursday, May 10, 2012

Maltese Falcon (part III); Selecting a film pitch

We will complete our viewing of The Maltese Falcon. After viewing the film, please post a forum response to one of the questions there.

Turn in a copy of your 3rd pitch draft. During 2nd period, please select one of your pitch projects and begin the following:
Create a structured plot point and plot outline for your film script BASED on your idea. Your film script should be between 8-15 pages (in film format).

Complete the character brainstorming worksheets as well in class for your film idea.

This is a solo project. Please work alone on creating a script.

You may have forgotten the film format. On the link page (see the right of this post) you will find instructions for film format. Please learn and use the proper film format for your screenplay. This is an ongoing project at the moment. Your participation in the lab will determine your deadline.

HOMEWORK: Complete the forum posts for Citizen Kane (Late); and The Maltese Falcon (due today).
If you have not yet read the Emergence of TV and HUAC please do so for Monday. We will be discussing it then.

Tuesday, May 8, 2012

The Maltese Falcon (part 2); The Emergence of TV

After our viewing of The Maltese Falcon (with any time remaining), we will begin brainstorming a pitch for a film noir film. See posts below for details. Check out the homework for the last few days (and throughout the next two weeks' posts, due to AP testing).

HOMEWORK: Complete your film pitch #3 (Film Noir). Read the article "HUAC & The Emergence of Television"; Post a forum response on The Maltese Falcon.

Friday, May 4, 2012

Citizen Kane: Ending

Today, we will screen the last bit of Citizen Kane. After we discuss your reactions, record your homework and complete the forum post for Tuesday.

Begin working on your third pitch: Film Noir (see below).

HOMEWORK: Please post a forum response to the question on the forum for Tuesday regarding the film Citizen Kane.

Thursday, May 3, 2012

Film Noir

Please turn in your second pitch assignments today.

The Elements of Film Noir (documentary)

Pitch #3 will be to write a story in the film noir genre. We've watched Citizen Kane (which used a lot of the film noir style), but after our viewing of The Maltese Falcon writing a film noir style pitch should be relatively easy.

Here are a few things to watch for as we screen The Maltese Falcon:

1. A protagonist that is cynical or detached
2. A femme fatale who leads the protagonist astray
3. A mystery, crime, or use of suspense
4. A naive scapegoat to take the rap of some "crime"
5. Goons (hired criminals who give the protagonist a hard time)
6. Razor sharp dialogue
7. Reference and description of low key lighting

The Maltese Falcon, directed and written for the screen by John Huston
Based on the novel by Dashiell Hammett
Other film noir films of the 1940's:
The Third Man 
The Big Sleep
Double Indemnity (full film)
Casablanca

Now a little technique and advice about making films:

The Murky Middle (Even More Advice)

Aristotle wrote that stories should have a beginning, middle, and end. Middles can be difficult. You might have a smashing opening to a stor...